Simile Poem on My Favourite Animal

Devmani Jha
4-D

Simile Poem on My Favourite Animal

I am a butterfly,
and my wings are like a paper,
as colourful as the rainbow;
and my eyes are like the marbles,
as bulbous as the bubbles;
and I fly like a cloud,
as smooth as butter.

24 thoughts on “Simile Poem on My Favourite Animal”

  1. Dear Devmani Jha,
    This poem marks a new beginning in your life.
    Poetry is an important art. It is an effective tool to convey one’s ideas, a flight for one’s thought, helps to open one’s mind and understand the working of a language and its symbol systems.
    Do keep thinking, feeling, imagining, writing and expressing yourself like this.
    Wishing you all the best in your future endeavours,
    Stay blessed!
    Amen!

  2. Well written. May you continue to write more with lots of purity, honesty, expressiveness, and right from your heart as you always do. God Bless. Congratulations.

  3. Dear Dev,
    Congrats to you for your first step towards literary arts. I am delighted to know about butterfly from your perspective in so many beautiful words. Hope you know the story of Caterpillar and butterfly. I am so eager to see you mature from Caterpillar to butterfly. Eager to see you spread your little wings and fly just like clouds in sky.
    With lots of love.

  4. Dear Devmani Jha,

    Your poem is wonderful. Aristotle believes poetry helps the purgation of the soul and I couldn’t agree more when I read your poem. It’s simple yet has a soul. I love the comparisons you’ve made and it takes a creative mind to create what you have! Keep writing!
    Goodluck and God Bless!

  5. Wow..v nice devmani Jha.

    Keep it up

    It’s also improves brain activity and attachments to nature๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š.

  6. Hello Dev
    To me butterfly depicts beauty and happiness. That is what you expressed in words. Continue to express your internal beauty in words which we can cherish. May God always shower happiness in your journey. Excellent beginning. Keep going we loved it !

  7. Dear dev mani
    U were and always be a star. This effort will definately take u a long way . Poems build u emotionally and helps u express . And expressing definately makes u stand out in the crowd. God bless u dear.
    Stay blessed

  8. Master Devmani jha
    Beautiful poem god bless you more more success n have a bright future a head
    Congratulations to JHA FAMILY
    KEEP IT UO
    DEVMANI๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

  9. A “Poetry ” is when an emotion has found its thought and a thought has found its words…..a nicely written emotion with a thought showing the beginning of a life… It’s (butterfly’s )colourful wings resembles the beauty of life and it’s inquisitiveness to fly high and seek the fragrance and nectar of life…… Keep it up my boy…. God bless

  10. A “Poetry ” is when an emotion has found its thought and a thought has found its words…..a nicely written emotion with a thought showing the beginning of a life… It’s (butterfly’s )colourful wings resembles the beauty of life and it’s inquisitiveness to fly high and seek the fragrance and nectar of life…… Keep it up my boy…. God bless

  11. Dear Dev,

    Soon I hope publishers will be queuing up to publish your wonderful poems ๐Ÿ‘
    You surely are blessed with those colourful wings and will fly high ….
    Congratulations to the JHA family

  12. Dear Devmani,
    Your little poem shows much promise. I liked the similes you have declaimed. I wondered at your choice of animal- a butterfly! Is it for your love of vibrant colors or the ease with which it flies unbounded?
    Comparing it’s wings with paper is truly inspiring because you use paper to express your ideas, communicate written word and to paint with colors.
    The second comparison shows your keen observation and that is also the contention behind my saying you have immense capabilities.
    Go ahead dear fearless and confident and you will achieve what you desire.

  13. Dear Devmani,
    Congratulations on your first poem. Great imagination displayed. May this journey of creative expressions be full of memorable experiences.
    Cynthia Dcosta

  14. Delightful poem, Master Dev. Oh, the vibrant hues and magnificent worlds the power of words can procure!
    This marks just the beginning of the dynamic milestones your pen can take you through.
    Wish you all the best of luck!

    Regards,

  15. Dear Devmani,
    Expressions are priceless when put to words which you’ve depicted very simplistically yet beautifully at such a tender age. You are truly an epitome of creativity and may you keep inspiring each one of us. God bless you and your family in all your future endeavors and I won’t be surprised to see a great poet one day budding out from you. Heartiest congratulations!:)

  16. Baikunth Nath Mishra
    27th August, 2018
    Dear DEVMANI R. JHA
    It is grate pleasure to us and I lightened too.
    Your poem is based on an imagination. How a butterfly is and how it flies in atmosphere freely, enjoys the truth of of life.
    We pray almighty to grace you with multi colour of thoughts and imaginations to grow and establish as a KID POET .

  17. Dear Devmani,
    I so loved your poem ๐Ÿ“ ๐Ÿฆ‹
    You reminded of these words from a poem by Pablo Neruda
    โ€œAnd it was at that age… Poetry arrived in search of me. I donโ€™t know, I donโ€™t know where it came from, from winter or a river.
    I donโ€™t know how or when,
    no, they were not voices, they were not words, nor silence…โ€
    And I thought ๐Ÿ’ญ ahh, so poetry has found you and touched you!!
    May you always be blessed and may poetry always be like a dear companion to you, Dev.

  18. Dear Dev,
    A poet is born in the family.
    Actually I m at loss of words since the beauty &
    Simplicity of your words dazed me.
    Lots of luv n kisses frm ur Bade Papa

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