Love You Mom

Rahul Singh
8 – A

Love You Mom

There are very few people who get mother’s love;
The one who gets are lucky as dove.
The one who cares for us day & night,
The one who shows the way that is always right!
The one who loves & the one who fights
For the one we have unreachable heights
Her efforts have removed darkness from everywhere!!
That is why the world is running so fair.
The one who cries and laughs with me;
The one who protects me like a tree.
God can’t reach everywhere so he made her!!!
Bacause she is none other than MOTHER
thats why:
First word; First letter; First ray;
My Mom!
First teacher; First school; First day ;
My Mom!!

8 thoughts on “Love You Mom”

  1. It’s a super creation and it’s very inspiring. I like the last four Lines ,they are expressed very beautifully . Keep writing such wonderful poems.

  2. I liked the line- ‘God can’t reach everywhere, so he made her’ the most. All the lines are inspiring. Keep up the same spirit.

  3. The poem is just awesome.I would like to dedicate a line to my mother”you hold my hand for short time but my heart for forever.”love you Mom.

  4. “You may be the smallest creation in the universe, but you mean the universe to me. I love you Mom!” A very beautiful poem Rahul! Keep it up!

  5. The poem is just awesome.I would like to dedicate a line to my mother”you hold my hand for short time but my heart for forever.”love you Mom.

  6. The formation of the poem is great! Purely looking like a professional work. Keep improving the quality of your writings and poems, you could become a great poet! 🙂

    P.S. It was really a great one! ….

  7. It really shows the importance of mom which is lacking today. Thanks for making us realise and keep inspiring us for writing beautiful poems.

  8. Mom is like a mould which shapes us perfectly, an umbrella that saves us from harsh things and a guide that who will never perish from my heart.
    Love u mom!!

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